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Leonorra Dainler's avatar

There’s such raw emotion in this poem. Even the attempt at a positive reframe is dripping with tears.

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

There’s a quiet sadness in this poem that feels incredibly real, like someone replaying a moment they wish hadn’t hurt so much.

I love how the honesty is shown so plainly just saying what you feel and watching the other person disappear.

Finding out through an Instagram caption hits hard; it’s such a modern, almost careless way to leave someone behind.

Mt. Fuji becomes this symbol of escape, beauty, and distance all at once.

You can feel the speaker turning the thought over and over, wondering if they were the thing being run from.

The “pancake flip” line is so human that’s exactly how overthinking sounds in your own head.

What stings most is the idea that someone would rather fly across the world than answer with the same honesty they were given.

The volcano metaphor is sharp and painful, a reminder of how far people will go to avoid vulnerability.

The poem captures that imbalance perfectly: one person brave enough to speak, the other too scared to stay.

By the end, “lost” feels like the only word that fits not dramatic, just true.

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